[Event "Teters 2018"] [Site "Mechanics Institute"] [Date "2018-08-09"] [White "Jamie Brotheridge"] [Black "Matthew Pace"] [WhiteElo "1604"] [BlackElo "700"] [Result "1-0"] 1.c4 d6 2.Nc3 e5 3.Nf3 Nc6 4.d4 Be6 {bad move you should take on d4 jb} 5.d5 Bd7 6.dxc6 Bxc6 7.Nd5 h6 {you should developed you're piece jb} 8.e4 Nf6 9.Bd3 b6 10.Qe2 g5 {that's not a good move you just weaking you're King side jb} 11.h3 Nd7 12.b4 a5 13.b5 Bb7 14.Bb2 Nc5 15.Bc2 Bg7 16.Ne3 Bf6 17.Rd1 Nxe4 {you should have left the pawn alone now my bishop is free jb} 18.Ng4 Nc5 19.Nxf6+ Qxf6 20.Nxe5 Ne6 21.Nd3 {#r}